Oh my god this is absolutely perfect I love it so much!!!
Reading this on the bus may not have been the best idea because I probably spent most of this blushing more than is advisable but I just had to read it the second I got the email that you updated!
All of the little details were perfect, I'm obsessed with how dob can't stop thinking about Liliana, and the proposal was amazing, especially with the night before!
Absolutely amazing work, I love it
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you! I pulled a little in from canon based on the wedding, during their vows, Katie says that Dob proposed by asking her to run away with him (paraphrasing) which I found interesting because that is what he said to Liliana. I don't think it was intentional on Johnny's part, as I think they were being poetic in the greater context of how they got engaged, but I locked in to that parallel and really wanted to use it here.
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