i don't think words can quite capture how much I loved this. I loved both Brad and Nate's characterizations, and especially how you showed Nate's PTSD. and the pacing!! most longfics I'm like halfway done and I'd be "holy shit this thing is looong" but here I'm just like "WHAT IT CAN'T END IT TOTALLY HASN'T BEEN 60K ADKJ;ALDFK1! D:"
haha i'm so incoherent, this is what goodfic does to me. great job!!
I'm glad this worked for you! Pacing, especially, was something I worried about, because, you know. It's 60,000 words about two dudes hanging out with a baby for ten days, and it's wallowy and slow. So I'm glad that worked for you! <3
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