Hmm I suppose I do get a bit of what u mean about the ending being rushed, but I also can't see anyway to make it better lol. I hope you figure it out!!
Personally, I find that going over and over the same piece isn't always helpful in improving writing ability. Just resist the urge and move on 😭 ur ideas and style are super cool so keep going!!
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