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  1. There’s something so deliciously wrong reading this. How sweet Konata is throughout the whole thing and just slightly manipulative like when she mentioned how the reader gave Kanata everything with nothing in return, and how they feel frustrated yet guilty when they end up going behind Kanata’s back.

    The ending is a gut punch with knowing what Kanata will stumble into but she herself is unaware, thinking that the reader is patiently waiting for her. NTR is usually a no go for me, but how you write it makes it feel addictive, maybe because the reader themselves acknowledges it’s wrong.

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