(❁´▽`❁) lovely!!! i especially enjoyed the “But John loves it. It’s all so very Paul, the performances he puts on that in their thinness reveal the messy truth of him. And once he really gets going, that all falls away, anyway, until it’s just Paul, low voice mixing honey-into-tea along with the skylarks and sparrows that jump through the blue, the staccato dog barks beyond the gates, the ship horns baying in the distance out on water. And Paul and John, planted deep in the green underneath it all.” ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡ really beautiful!
Awww thank you!! Yeah I was particularly happy with that line, I wanted to capture the feeling of the entire world just falling away to the spot where they're both lying, but also John's awareness of Paul being one piece in the 'tapestry of it all' etc., and bringing all the "sounds of Liverpool" into the fic to really bring life to the setting. I'm so glad you enjoyed!!!!!
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