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  1. lightness_demoanya Sun 14 Jun 2026 03:46AM UTC

    "You're lucky I still want you, your God sure doesn't." WAY TO END ON THE COLDEST FUCKING LINE IN THE HISTORY OF LITERATURE!!!!

    i was stressed as FUCK reading this, and that is a very good thing. omfg. the CONSTANT presence of Val interrupting every word Husk gets in... it was so grating. so disorienting. i felt like i was in angel's head

    and ANGEL EVENTUALLY RESPONDING TO VAL!!! ANGEL TRYING TO SHOVE IT DOWN WITH SEX AND AFFECTION!! HOLY FUCK he was trying so hard to be good for husk, and husk probably would've understood the hallucinations... but no, angel has to hide it under withdrawal, because that makes him look like the good guy because he's making PROGRESS!!! angel who chases perceived innocence because it makes him feel worthy to suffer... OGHHHHHFHENNCNED

     

    anyways, EVERYTHING ABOUT ANGEL CRAWLING BACK TO VAL HAD ME CREAMING. holy fuck. i had to put my phone down for a bit and giggle to myself.

    again, THIS IS PEAK.

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    1. Ophelianessa Mon 15 Jun 2026 09:26PM UTC

      Thank you!! I wrote that line and I was just like "oop, I guess the fic is over now."

      Aaaaaah yes! I'm so glad it did what I wanted to, I'm so proud of this one.

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