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  1. CeridwenofWales on Chapter 12 Tue 03 Oct 2017 11:07AM UTC

    Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments. I love it. <3

     

    I confess that what made me change my mind about writing two different endings was the support I received with the story.

    I wanted Ivar to be reminded that he was not good to her. I wanted to show he was being delusional, maybe in hope Moyra would forget and forgive?! But she was resolute and I wanted to use one of the explanations for his nickname in the story. The allegedly lack of lust.

    I loved the line you highlighted. It was one of my favorites because it shows how she is aware her body has been used to bring him satisfaction and she won't allow it anymore. She will fight back.

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