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1. CeridwenofWales on Chapter 12 Fri 06 Oct 2017 05:24PM UTC

   

   I know. My heart is broken too. I was so afraid to write this. Because people tend to see pregnancy and motherhood as a fairytale and this story is anything but a fairytale. I didn't want to make Moyra look like an "evil woman", but Medea was by my side pushing me not to be afraid. Hahahaha.

   I agree that's the only way Moyrs could win. I'm blushing that you felt that's how the story was meant to end, it was how I planned in the beginning. And Moyra being the one to push Ivar to become the legend we know was something that I loved writing.

    

   Thank you so much for your constant support and kindness. I love you!!!

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2. 1. pokeasleepingsmaug on Chapter 12 Thu 12 Oct 2017 04:38PM UTC

      

      I don't think Moyra was an evil woman at all in this, she seemed to me more like a tragic hero. I just loved this so, so much. This alternate ending was so sad, but it was so much more fitting to the story than the other one. I LOVED the happier ending too though! The entire idea behind the story was just so heart-breaking. I'm glad you listened to Medea and weren't afraid to write this! I love you sister!

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   2. 1. CeridwenofWales on Chapter 12 Thu 12 Oct 2017 07:29PM UTC

         

         I'm glad you don't see her as evil and that you loved this ending. I feel like I must be much more careful with the sequel not to turn into a story that apologize rape. The concept of consent walks in a thin line here. I love you too. <3

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