Comment on The Things a Man Does For Love

  1. chironsgirl Thu 15 Nov 2018 09:31PM UTC

    I like this a lot. I am bookmarking it, because I want you to write more of this story.
    I'm wondering who Mr. Fields is, who the "invisible" man is, I wonder who William is. I want to know who Mr. Mouloudji is. You made me curious, darn it!
    It's your own fault, you wrote a good fic!

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    1. MyRubicon Mon 19 Nov 2018 05:07PM UTC

      To be honest, I really don't know who they are. I started writing and they just showed up!
      Minor characters are a bit difficult, I think; too much info and they distract from the story and the main characters, too little depth and they're just cardboad cutouts. I'm glad I managed to make you curious. :)

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