This was fantastic! The way you wrote Greg's observations was so in line with what you'd expect from him! Thorough, but without the Holmesian omniscience. I enjoyed every moment of this, thank you so much for sharing it with us. I'm very excited to read your other stories.
PS- I couldn't tell English wasn't your first language. Granted I'm American so... ;)
Thank you! Sherlock is often frustrated by Greg's slowness, but I like to think that an unintelligent man wouldn't have managed to become a DI in the first place. Also, he's had several years of watching Sherlock work now, and I think that would have contributed to him becoming a pretty good (though not Holmes-level brilliant) observer himself.
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