Please let me explain because this sounds so rude but this made me sick to my stomach. I mean that in the way that it was so beautiful and heartbreaking and there was this sense of hopelessness and acceptance in Keith that just..ugh it really gets you. Your writing is so beautiful, it has a poetic air to it but it’s also very simplistic, you have the ability to say a lot without using so many words, which is a talent not a lot of writers have. I was scared to read this because unrequited love is so damn sad but you hooked me in the first paragraph, and I’ve read it over several more times and it’s a punch to the gut every time. I’m truely blown away this is incredible and I hope you have the desire to write more and enjoy doing so as much as I enjoy reading what you offer, even though it hurrrrrts.
thank you SO much, i cant put into words how much this comment means to me. im so so glad i was able to convey the kind of emotion i felt realizing these two wouldnt be canon and place it into their world, and im glad i was able to pull an emotional response from you too (hope youre not too sick though, and you werent rude at all dont worry!) thank you again <3
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