Sharod (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Thu 18
Jul 201902:45PM UTC
I for one am thoroughly enjoying this. You have managed to allow them to be in the current storyline but also go back and touch on some past issues, when the girls, one afraid and confused about her feelings and the other was lying about hers, when they were last in San Francisco. Loving it. BY THE WAY: I would love to read the story of Mariah actually surprising Tessa with that trip to Canada to visit Crystal.
I'm happy to read you're enjoying it, thanks for your comments! Here's a spoiler for the next chapter, Mariah ends up letting Tessa in on her surprise. I'll definitely consider a Canada trip fic, thanks for the suggestion.
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Sharod (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 18 Jul 2019 02:45PM UTC
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