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1. Sharod (Guest) on Chapter 3 Tue 23 Jul 2019 03:01PM UTC

   Unfortunately for us the reader-this is not the beginning but the end. I have joyous tears in my eyes as I am typing this comment. That was an incredible adventure for us to take on their journey through your storytelling of Mariah and Tessa. I enjoyed it all so, so much but my favorite part has to be this: (A few minutes later Mariah excitedly exclaims, "I have an idea." She springs out of bed, much to Tessa's dismay and confusion. "What are you doing?" "Just wait, you're going to love it," she replies, walking towards the bathroom. "Ooh, I forgot something!" she said, turning back around. "Yeah, me," Tessa says with a pout.) It made me giggle and it felt so real.
   Thanks for the memories. I LOVED IT.

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2. 1. ThankGravity on Chapter 3 Tue 23 Jul 2019 06:41PM UTC

      

      Your comment is SO sweet. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and favorite moment, I'm so happy it made you smile!

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