This was amazing. There's some stories where you can almost feel the atmosphere of a new location envelop you (Mekakucity Actors, Durarara, Artemis Fowl and Hunger Games are a few for me) and you really, really captured it well with this fic. It works just fine with the amount we're given with the characters in-story, but at the same time there's so many details and narratives going on in the background that it actually feels like a real world- if that makes sense? All of this is just to say that I really, really liked it a lot. I loved seeing the little glimpses of the Mekakushi-Dan moving forward in the world after facing their fears, and Momo in particular was amazing - when I first watched Mekakucity Actors I found her interesting but never had the knowledge to fully relate to her, if that makes sense. But now I have that knowledge and then some, and in addition you gave us such a wonderful perspective in Minoru the self-made composer. It's so great!
Ahhhhh thank you! I'm sorry I've taken so long to reply to your review but it absolutely meant a lot! Since I started writing fic, one of my goals has been to make the settings of the fandoms I write feel real and lived-in--I started out on MCU fic and I always envied the way those writers made the world feel bigger than just the main characters, like there were a dozen different stories happening just out of sight. So the fact that I managed to do that to some extent means a lot! Also, I'm glad I gave you a little extra perspective on Momo--she's super underrated and I love her a lot. Thank you so much for reviewing!
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