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  1. Otter: keep clam

    Oh, wow. These two stories are beautiful. You've captured how self-aware and self-deluded Sherlock is, and how marvelously, un-showily strong John is, and the way that strength just might mean that this relationship might not end in a train wreck. It's rare to see characterization done this well by means of sex.

    I've longed to see Sherlock like this -- this chance that he could be softened without being broken.

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    1. Thank you so much! As for softening without breaking...that's exactly where I'm headed, I hope. Thank you for your thoughtful feedback! Loved Equanimity, too. :)

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      1. Otter: keep clam

        Glad you liked it!

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