Comment on Family You Made (Go Back, Do it Again)

  1. [Dick waves, Tim’s got both his hands full with his little testing spoon and his small kiddie cup, so he gives a cute little wiggle with his whole body from where he sits.] theyre all so cute!!!

    i love catherine and bruce being good parents so much

    [If this is what causes the sun to burn out then Dick will carry that burden all the way to his grave. Again.] my heart achessss

    [She’s going to make the people respect her. Catherine’s going to make a name for herself and she’s going to take the Wayne Industries Chairty Department by fucking storm.] i got goosebumps

    [(Jason and Tim immediately start to try and punch each other hard enough in the kidneys that the other would pee blood.)] LMFAO NOOO

    [(Dick had used it all the way up until Bruce had died.)] every off hand thought about the future dick is for HURTS

    god catherine is breaking my heart

    [Tim is the one who starts up first. “We know this is related to the Poison Ivy breakout last night, right?”] LMAO i love these boys

    [The police had asked everyone about everything they could, ignoring when the circus people came up and directly told the force that the culprit was the mobster who had tried to shake the circus down for money a week ago.] im so mad

    [Janet Drake doesn’t give a shit about who else Bruce Wayne has slept with, she is not letting the man take her fucking son away from her.] i have so much mixed feelings help me god

    [She’s not going to die from this.
    She refuses.] god i love how youve written the women in this story
    just absolutely phenomenal i think

    the bring your children to work day!!!! adorable

    ["Oh.” Bruce has a revelation, and it’s one he should have had a long time ago. “Oh, my kids might be a little fucked up.”] i let out such a loud laugh fkdksknf

    [In the smallest voice, just the smallest voice that Bruce has spoken in for a long time, “Tim– Tim is mine?”] oh my god i went "oh... oh FUCK" out loud because holy fuck

    [“He was fine.” Janet bites out the sound. “He never talked back, he did everything we said, he was perfect until he started to come over here.”] that means he never got to be a kid until he was with the waynes noo

    [There’s nothing that will stop him from being a total menace here.] hes living his best life and i love that for him

    [. With no scars in his inner arms and a healthy glow to his face he wouldn’t refind in the original timeline until he was thirty.] hurts me ow

    [Dick was once in a relationship with Wally when they had been older.
    Now Wally is annoying as hell with an imagined confrontational beef between the two of them and his constant teenage angst.] this is so damn funny oh my god
    but love this so much
    learning about where the titans are and how dick has turned everyone's lives for the better
    and also him having to deal with kids and loving them anyway.
    that line about having so much time really stuck with me

    [It would be prettier when it was wet, however, in that way that rocks can only be found when they’re in a river. So Jason puts it back.] mmmm a metaphor right

    [Catherine’s smile freezes awkwardly on her face. “I’m sorry– what, honey?”] the kids are doing great and everyone else is just strung along and i love it

    [The thought of not passing down Robin though feels…
    It feels like he is doing a disservice to the memory of the people that are twenty feet from him, twenty years from now.] this is so bitter sweet it hurts

    [Catherine Jonah Todd made the world a better place, and she went peacefully into her own heaven while making it so.] oh no
    im desperately wiping tears away
    youve written this story so well and ive fallen in love with everyone in this story. maybe especially catherine and the strength you gave her. i didnt know who shed be in their lives and that she was their mother and so much more is so heart achingly good

    [Harvey’s face is so red that he can’t look Batman or Robin in the eye. Jim is even embarrassed for him.] LMAOOOO JIM IS SO GOOD

    so so good that mini speech to batman about being a good man a good parent!!

    i love dove and sunbird!!!!!
    and the nickname sunny!!!!!!!!

    [Sunbird is partial to her own plain fist in armored gloves, but it’s quickly known that the lacing on her costume doubles as a sunrise colored garrote when needed.] THAT SOUNDS SO PRETTY

    [Dick had half raised Damian up into a respectable young man– a young man who had gone to veterinary school and had cried for two days surrounded by family when he first had to put down an animal.] im in shambles!

    bruce knowing dick has memories of a family and him protecting him from possible hurt god im hurting

    [They must be overreacting. Hal should be embarrassed by how easy it is for Clark.
    Well– maybe he gloats in his head until Cass disappears.] LMAOOOOO

    [Is she crawling through the walls?
    It takes six hours to finally track her down to the greenhouse, asleep among the roses with her arm bent under her head. She looks too peaceful for someone who has made Clark run around in circles down the corridors of Wayne’s West Wing.] LMFAO

    TIM AND THE WHITE NOISE FROM GOOGLING THE FREQUENCY OF DOG HEARING?! SMART LITTLE BEAN

    [Talia fights like she fucks.] ooh this line hits hard for some reason
    it may be because this whole fic so far has been focused on the kids and had tame language?

    [She’s vicious, deadly, and so damn beautiful. This is the world's most dangerous version of flirting.] oh he likes her

    [Jason had shown up to breakfast once, informed Clark in succinct tones that the four of them– yes, Dick included– were going to be dismantling a cult about some kind of bird in Gotham, and that they knew that Clark wasn’t meant to let them out without Bruce being here but that also Clark couldn’t catch them now, could he?] THE COURT OF OWLS?!

    [The kids were here. They were in the manor. He hears them scuttling.
    Clark just needed to prove it.] hes sounds like hes going insane lmfaoooo

    [Talia looks up at him, into his eyes. It wasn’t the first time they were in this position– she hopes it wouldn’t be the last. “You haven’t let me try, beloved.”] WOW this scene is just wow

    [Add the white noise and the lead painted walls meant that Clark can’t even cheat despite how frantic he begs the vents to make it stop.] LMFAOOOOOOOOO

    [This is a horror movie, specifically designed to make Clark crazy.
    There’s giggling coming from the attic again, Clark can tell it’s Cass this time. There’s also the sound of feet in the wine cellar, the weight of each footprint makes Clark think it’s Jason.
    Son of a bitch.] i love this so much.
    the kids just making each hero's personal hell

    [Bruce, still, pets a dodo bird. He’s not going to turn that one down.] A DODO BIRD?!

    i love your take on talia and bruce
    and once again i love how youve written the women in this story
    and that damian isnt cut off from his mother!

    [Clark hears the jet long before Bruce actually manages to come home. He notices the distinct sound of the sleek black Batplane about four hours before Bruce should land.] HES SO READY TO LEAVE LMAO

    [Dick’s been ugly crying for about thirty minutes until he ran out of tears to cry, one arm wrapped around his dad and his other hand loosely, gently holding onto Damian.
    Dick lays limp there, on his father, with his littlest itsines baby brother in his sight and the rest of his siblings clinging on, just happy to be there.] oh hes been through so much :((( but hes got all his siblings safe!!!

    [And Dick thanks anyone who would listen that fate decided to make it so.] im ready to cry!

    [What’s surprising is that Damian enjoys it when Tim gets close– when Tim picks Damian up with small arms and holds him like an overstuffed teddy bear. ] THATS ADORABLE OH MY GOD

    [Damian on the kid’s lap is clicking at the dummy keyboard] THATS SO CUTE

    [Bruce doesn’t know whether to be proud that he’s managed to raise them like this or horrified at the power they wield when they glued him to the dinner table one time.] LMFAO

    [Jason cries, real heavy thick tears as he accepts.
    Batman gets passed down, from father to son.] CRYING!! theyve come so far

    that sunny peaceful ending where dick's family is whole is just so so good my heart is full
    this was such a joy to read
    there is so much heart and spirit packed into this im just so in love
    i feel like ive gone on a journey and grown. spent a lifetime with them. watched the kids grow up. but also gone through the same hardships as them.

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