Comment on The Sea Wolves

  1. KesterR on Chapter 12 Sun 09 Oct 2022 06:23AM UTC

    As someone that has a thirst for angst I really loved this ending
    at the beginning I was also wondering if she would actually make any attempt at killing herself

    This is one of those stories that I wish would be 50 chapters long
    so we could see all the nuances of her situation
    more of hel mental struggle and coping mechanisms
    remembering her family
    and specially more confrontation from her and groveling on his part

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    1. CeridwenofWales on Chapter 12 Mon 14 Nov 2022 08:25PM UTC

      I loved your comment and how detailed you were to point out what you've enjoyed and what you've missed in this story. Some of the topics you mentioned are present in the sequel: Alpha and Omega. The Sea Wolves was definitely a joint work, because I kept adding and changing some scenes according to the feedback I got here and on Tumblr. Due to its nature, I feel this story is always in progress as I grow as a person and learn more, I tend to return and change some things here.

      Thanks again for the lovely feedback and I'm grateful you've enjoyed it

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