Wow okay so first off: this is incredibly well written. Your narrative voice and diction are just, amazing. The way you write is incredibly intriguing, and I loved it. A lot.
Also, this is like one of the first possessive/creepy Bill fics that I've read in which their relationship didn't feel wrong somehow? Like I don't know how you did it, but even though it's twisted and possessive it doesn't alarm the little "save Dipper" spidey senses. So all the kudos to you. It's hard to get this kind of relationship without going too far or too little. You got the perfect balance. A++++++ job.
Overall this was just intense and gorgeous, you're awesome. :D
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