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  1. DEPiston (Aposure) on Chapter 1 Wed 07 Jun 2023 06:35PM UTC

    Good luck! You can do this! There is really a load of different stories with an overarching story.

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    1. Sarcosmic on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 05:45AM UTC

      Ok so like,,,,,, im on chapter 95- i meant to read abt 5 chapters a day- not 100+- its just so gOod man aAaAa /pos

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      1. DEPiston (Aposure) on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 06:11PM UTC

        Keep reading. :D There is hundreds more chapters to read.

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    3. Sarcosmic on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 06:08AM UTC

      Also, quick question- their relationship in heppy marriage kind of reminded me of katniss and peetas relationship in hunger games, for instance with scar as snow, breathing down their necks and parading them around to the quote-unquote public, his nobles and lackeys, while most of the population starves/lives in squalor, staging them as his puppets while main character orchestrates a rebellion right underneath his nose (other similarites as well, im just too lazy too list them all :D)- i was wondering if this was intentional? if not, pls ignore my silly bookworm brain :)

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      1. DEPiston (Aposure) on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 06:13PM UTC

        I will be honest... I never read it. I wrote it wanting to write a story about how Mumbo and Grian were both secret agents and trying to cover it up.

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    5. Sarcosmic on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 06:21AM UTC

      ALSO AH FAHK I MEANT TO SAY THAT im highkey hooked on this fic, op, your writing style is so good and refreshing, all the stories so far have such interesting premises and plotlines, and the underlying story has me going ?????? But also !!!!!! At the same time /pos- i just- aaAAA in sUCH A GOOD WAY :DDD

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      1. DEPiston (Aposure) on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Jun 2023 06:13PM UTC

        Awww thank you! It is basically me trying out different genres :D

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