Comment on 52 instances of neck touching

  1. killyouridols on Chapter 3 Mon 18 Dec 2023 10:50PM UTC

    Hey, first of all i'm sorry about the war and the happy pills thing, i hope the meds help and that you're safe :/
    Secoooond - this was a great chapter again and i feel like Suguru is pretty on point, it makes sense that he isn't so "fleshed out" given it's Satoru’s pov and uh, i feel he lacks the ability to see others as full-fledged multidimensional humans, even Suguru. That's how I perceive him at least. So it doesn't feel weird in this setting.
    BUT. but. i'm really fucking curious what Suguru's pov would be like written by you so I say go for it :D

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    1. deadwinter on Chapter 3 Fri 29 Dec 2023 10:33PM UTC

      firstly, thank you so much! i really appreciate it, truly, it means a lot!

      and secondly, YOU GET IT!! "he lacks the ability to see others as full-fledged multidimensional humans, even Suguru" yes absolutely exactly my point through this whole fic ahaha

      i'm cautious about disrupting the beauty of satoru's unreliable narrator here so i was thinking of doing a one-shot in a series for suguru's pov, i already have a few snippets written out but not making any promises for now..

      thank you so much for reading and commenting!! it's always a joy to have people like your work<3

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