I loved reading more of this AU, I loved that you wrote a sequel, but poor Cloudo, the beginning was so funny, everyone's reaction, even Barret being so jealous, his accusations, the fact that everyone knows what happened, everyone caught it and is gossiping about Cloud with the Turks! How Cloud is very embarrassed, the several times he thinks he wants Sephiroth to appear and kill him is very funny! But I really liked Vincent in this chapter, he's nice, but the tension between him and Barret, when they start talking, Barret trying to understand and be kind, but the way Cloud told what happened, just about what happened to him and the Turks, the way he told the story was so erotic and hot! And from the looks of it, Barret and Cloud have feelings for each other? The tension between them, them getting so horny and them finally fucking!
Cloud has wanted this for years, they have so many desires for each other, Cloud is so horny, he is finally fulfilling his fantasy of being fucked by Barret's big cock, he is so huge! And I admit that I really loved the daddy kink, how Cloud was touched, dominated and fucked by Barret and him calling him daddy, all making them hornier, Barret becoming Cloud's daddy!? And how did he want to make Cloud cum a lot, have several orgasms and as much pleasure as possible? Barret very jealous and possessive, right? And he wants Cloud to belong to him? If Cloud wants to be fucked again, to feel pleasure, he doesn't need to leave the house, just go to him? Is Cloud such a mess and begging while being a good boy to Barret? The sex scene was incredibly hot and he was so satisfied by his side at the end!
Cloud really had a huge crush on Barret and now they're going to become a couple? Are they going to date? Cloud won't have sex with the Turkos anymore? I wonder what the others will react to all this and hope that the next day, Cloud will be able to swallow and suck Barret's dick as much as he wanted, right?
Cloud really had a huge crush on Barret and now they're going to become a couple? Are they going to date? Cloud won't have sex with the Turkos anymore? I wonder what the others will react to all this and hope that the next day, Cloud will be able to swallow and suck Barret's dick as much as he wanted, right?
Guess you’ll have to keep an eye out for part three (which I’ll start when I’m through my backlog of actual work, so maybe give it a couple weeks).
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MoonLord Sat 13 Apr 2024 11:29AM UTC
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