Agh this is incredible so far! 🤩 I really love how you describe them in such creative ways, especially Husk - how you described him in comparison to his daughter flowed so well, and you do an amazing job at creating such a detailed image Your dialogue is also so good, along with the internal monologues for both Henry and Anthony, just so so in character for both of them I’m obsessed Really excited for more! 💚
Thank you SO MUCH 🥹❤️ Yayyy, I really love to describe them with details cause, yeah, I love details ✨ for me, a story feels so real, if you can “see” what’s happening, so .. Yay details! And thank you again 🥹 I’m having fun writing the dialogues and their inner monologues, I’m so happy you liked them!
More is coming veeeery soon - wednesday or thursday! 👀
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