This was such a cute read and had me kicking my feet like a school girl!! I think you totally nailed March's personality, you write him really well and tbh it's the first fic I've read where I thought "yeah, he would act and talk like that". Your writing style is also really pleasant to read and flows well. I was disappointed to see that it's your only FOM fic so far, I hope you continue to write more cause I'd definitely love to read it! :)
This is such a huge compliment!! <3 Thank you so much! I really tried to keep him in character and I was a little worried since we don’t have a lot of heart events yet, so I’m glad you think I nailed him. I’ve been trying to get into writing more lately and this game really inspired me so I’d like to make more! :)
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