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1. KWrite on Chapter 1 Mon 07 Apr 2025 09:31PM UTC

   

   I'm loving the start of this so far - which means I'll have a hard time deciding if I want to binge the prequel fic first or catch up on this one before moving back. Decisions, decisions.

   The short sentences and trailing thoughts I think really hammer home Tav's lethargicness. It definitely gives the feeling of someone who hasn't given up, but is too tired to really act.

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2. 1. JPineappleZ on Chapter 1 Tue 08 Apr 2025 07:35AM UTC

      

      I am glad that Tav comes across as lethargicy, since that's what I was going for ^_^

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