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  1. Yuri_oo on Chapter 3 Wed 11 Jun 2025 10:19PM UTC

    I'm writing inspired by a movie (it's not old, tho), so I pretty much have a lot of dialogue (because they're easier to come up with) and huge gaps between them to fill. I'm trying my best to make it very sensorial and intimate.
    Also, my favorite tense to use is the past tense, and I simply love stories where the year it happens is an element of the narrative. Like, the characters are in the 70s, how does it influence them? It makes me want to learn how to make the story feel like it's in the past.

    And if it helps, at least Armin will take a bit longer to get sad??? (It probably doesn't help ;-;)

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    1. Unmalnombredeusuario on Chapter 3 Thu 12 Jun 2025 04:14AM UTC

      No, it doesn't help haha but I'm a dramatic ass so I'll stick around anyway (also I love stories that feel this domestic, even if they make me want to kms afterwards ʘ⁠‿⁠ʘ)

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