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  1. This made my heart ache! So sad but sweet. Lots of beautiful little details and insights that took me right into the mindset of Lochlan - you wrote him so so so so well. I loved this line - "It’s hard to have all this knowledge in his head and still remember that no one wants to know." ADORE THAT, especially for Lochy.
    Also I'm a sucker for all three Ratliffs being affectionate/bonding after trauma. I just love those bbs and I loved the last scene so much.

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    1. Aaaa thank you so so much ♥️ i means so much to me that you think i captured Lochlan (and form an expert, too!)
      and same. i need them to be there for each other even in their weird unhealthy ways!!

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