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It’s been 4 sweeps since he was killed, and you were here, raising this brat on your own. Time sure have changed.
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Fuck, that was so cute (and sad).
Loved the whole thing until the end. Honestly, the ending fucking sucked just for how unrealistic abd suddenky so OOC that was. Karkat wouldnt do that, expecially for such pathetic reason. Seeimg Sollux suffer? Wanting to kill himself? Crying, being in horrible mental shape? And Karkat was just like, 'aww, thats sadge, but im too embarassed to come back and stop the one i love from maybe killimg himself...'
Embarassed of what? that he doesnt have wings...?
.....??!??!!
Thats the most bullshit reason anyone could thing of and completely unlike anything Karkat Vantas is like. He would literally fight blood and gore to be with those he loves, to save them, to help them, totally impulsively and he wouldnt think about himself even one second.
Sollux wouldnt eat that shit up also. If Karkat did so, holy shit, he doesnt love Sollux even a little bit - well, obviously. He didnt mind seeing him suffer for 8 FUCKING YEARS.
Thats the most bullshit and OOC ending i have ever read in any fanfic.
So...
I'm just going to believe that, maybe, those are Zohann's psychic powers - he has Karkat's blood, he's conjuring him with them, and somehow, that gives him access to Karkat's memories. He can use those powers to even massage Sollux as Karkat. And the kid doesn't realize at all that it's just his powers because he wishes so bad for Sollux to not hurt and be happy - so, he's making up the thing that makes him happy, in his mind, and taking that genetic information Karkat is, AND maybe it even feeds off Solluxs psyche - thats why the made up 'Karkat' has his memories, but, also why he's so OOC. Because it's not the real him. Also reason the 'why Karkat didn't wanted to stay with them' reasons were the biggest, most dumb, surface, feelingless and superficial shit one could think of. Because Zohann is just a wriggler and doesn't really understand, or maybe he's just trying to protect Sollux from breaking up the immersion.
Also good reason why karkat was constantly freezing up. He's made up.
If that was the case and that was canon for this fic, shit. That'd be just sad. That'd be a good sad ending.
Like, look, dude, its such a shitty end of the fic if you really thought about making this a happy end in such dumb way. There could been thousand better ways to bring Karkat back alive - like him being lost in dream bubbles and not able to find a way back for exmaple. Or maybe dissapearing from reality.
But him, finding out, the day he 'died' that hes alive and Sollux is there, not going back to him?
Id get it if he was lost in bubbles for sweeps, then came back, and not knowing to approach Sollux and Zohann (fuck that name).
But, 'lol i was alive, all around, watched you suffer, lol, you had to do everything on your own, dont really care, guess im gonna jus' leave again, hehe, cuz, u kno, embarassed, no wings and all, kekw, bye sollecks'
dude...
It actually would been better if Karkat actually said those half assed reasons in his poor try to get sollux to agree to him not joining them, but failing, and then saying something like "The real reason I can't stay is that I'm dead, and I'm not physically able to stay here much longer."
That'd be sad AND believable, good end.
Or even just have Karkat stay... Dude. at least give a good reason and not that halfassed shit up there. Ruined it for me, which was a really sweet fic I loved until like the 2-3 last chapters.
There's something weird going on. I can't believe this great author whonwrites all these nice, well thought fics would do something so thoughtless and, that superficial reasoning...
Yeah. Their wriggler is conjuring Karkat. It's sad af. Tht's what i believe. That's tragic, but at least an end i can accept.
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ahhh tears
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