Comment on Daeron "The Undead" Targaryen | A Plague of Poor Decisions

1. No_sleepie on Chapter 5 Mon 23 Mar 2026 07:04PM UTC

   

   Also, any feedback on the horror bits in this chapter?
   I feel like I kinda rushed to the bloody-payoff, maybe I should build up more of the dread.

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2. 1. ImperialDragon on Chapter 5 Mon 23 Mar 2026 07:40PM UTC

      

      I don't think it was a rush to the bloody-payoff, Maekar and the Maester now know that the threat is real. Will their efforts be enough to save those they love? More dread awaits because the flow of information is slowed, not knowing what is happening elsewhere. Also the horror of wondering who is infected and will become aggressive.

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   2. 1. No_sleepie on Chapter 5 Mon 23 Mar 2026 11:56PM UTC

         

         Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm glad it doesn't feel rushed.

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