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  1. Why not ellipses?

    That's too long of a pause.

    The monsters line specifically made me think that, like, of course to Link monsters are not a big deal. He's good at fighting them off.

    The dialogue is specifically that he's not encountering the monsters at all, though -- he says people are telling stories about monsters, Granny says they're probably exaggerating, and Link agrees. He's never actually seen one.

    I'll see what I can do about adjusting the description in the cell scene.

    ETA: I've added a line about Zelda being in a cell at the start of the second scene, and changed the dialogue in the third scene to make it clearer Link's not seen any monsters.

    Last Edited Sat 24 Apr 2021 04:48PM UTC

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    1. Una (Spring)

      The dialogue is specifically that he's not encountering the monsters at all, though -- he says people are telling stories about monsters, Granny says they're probably exaggerating, and Link agrees. He's never actually seen one.
      Ah, I missed that! That one's on me, though.

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