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  1. Chrono_Stasis on Chapter 6 Fri 02 Jul 2021 11:26AM UTC

    Extra kudos 🖤
    Poor Izuku.
    My guess is that All Might was indeed quirkless, hardened & bitter over year and no longer hopeful paragon. But person who carries enormous burden and regrets accepting that quirk. Missing some organs and with limited time he can use power - he can't even open up being No 1 hero. He sees himself in Deku and doesn't want him to suffer.

    Good thing that Walmart Mothman came.

    PS - some minor typos -

    It was going better, Izuku knows that.
    going - > getting

    His chest felt heavy and his limbs felt like led,
    led - > lead

    “YOU WHERE THE ONE THAT ASKED FOR HELP!
    WHERE - > WERE

    I’m at an advantage
    advantage - > disadvantage

    No he did speal, although it was only a few words.
    speal - > speak

    He got pushed of a bridge.
    of - > off

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    1. The_LonleyCorner on Chapter 6 Fri 02 Jul 2021 11:42AM UTC

      No deep meaning

      haha I'm not going to speak on the All Might theory since this will appear later in the fic But I like the way you're thinking!

      also thanksssss for the corrections! I wrote this chapter at 4am and forgot to reread it,, typo's like these are annyoing to read so I'll fix them!

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      1. Chrono_Stasis on Chapter 6 Fri 02 Jul 2021 12:56PM UTC

        Welcome ☺
        It's easier to notice someone else's typos as you're reading it for first time. I've made my fair shares of typos.

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