Yeah, this was basically the first scene I wanted to write from the book. At the same time, I kind of get why Weir left it out since the book is more oriented around science and technological issues rather than personal drama. But hey, that's what fanfics are for.
And yeah, the little language thing at the end was a little detail that snuck up on me. I'm kind of surprised that it didn't appear in the book, but like you said, Weir is more science based than language based.
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