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  1. KeeblerMC on Chapter 8 Sun 07 Jul 2013 03:22AM UTC

    "Smirked" as satisfied smile, or small smile, without any hint of cockiness.

    Hate HATE it after some mutually heartfelt shy confession and then one of them smirks. NO HE FUCKING DIDN'T. Promotes hostility in my blood.

    Your writing promotes other things.

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    1. mydwynter on Chapter 8 Sun 07 Jul 2013 05:09AM UTC

      Holmes wreathed in smoke. By me.

      Seriously? I'm not sure I've ever seen that. Or if I had, I'd have spun it in my head that the person was being…I dunno, self-deprecatingly insincere or something. Who knows. My brain would have done somersaults to make it work.

      I am pleased that I'm writing does not promote hostility. Yes I am indeed. Oh yes.

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      1. KeeblerMC on Chapter 8 Sun 07 Jul 2013 07:11AM UTC

        I've turned my brain over and over in some stories trying to make the word work - rereading multiple paragraphs beford just being mad.

        Clearly, I need to let this go. And I hope I didn't pass my word jinx on to you.

        AND the main point of the comment must be revived: your writing is fab-o and I thank you for it!

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        1. mydwynter on Chapter 8 Mon 08 Jul 2013 04:58PM UTC

          Holmes wreathed in smoke. By me.

          I hope it wasn't passed on, either! (But it probably was.)

          Anyway, thank you! :)

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