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  1. "Smirked" as satisfied smile, or small smile, without any hint of cockiness.

    Hate HATE it after some mutually heartfelt shy confession and then one of them smirks. NO HE FUCKING DIDN'T. Promotes hostility in my blood.

    Your writing promotes other things.

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    1. Holmes wreathed in smoke. By me.

      Seriously? I'm not sure I've ever seen that. Or if I had, I'd have spun it in my head that the person was being…I dunno, self-deprecatingly insincere or something. Who knows. My brain would have done somersaults to make it work.

      I am pleased that I'm writing does not promote hostility. Yes I am indeed. Oh yes.

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      1. I've turned my brain over and over in some stories trying to make the word work - rereading multiple paragraphs beford just being mad.

        Clearly, I need to let this go. And I hope I didn't pass my word jinx on to you.

        AND the main point of the comment must be revived: your writing is fab-o and I thank you for it!

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        1. Holmes wreathed in smoke. By me.

          I hope it wasn't passed on, either! (But it probably was.)

          Anyway, thank you! :)

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