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  1. mydwynter on Chapter 8 Sun 07 Jul 2013 05:09AM UTC

    Holmes wreathed in smoke. By me.

    Seriously? I'm not sure I've ever seen that. Or if I had, I'd have spun it in my head that the person was being…I dunno, self-deprecatingly insincere or something. Who knows. My brain would have done somersaults to make it work.

    I am pleased that I'm writing does not promote hostility. Yes I am indeed. Oh yes.

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    1. KeeblerMC on Chapter 8 Sun 07 Jul 2013 07:11AM UTC

      I've turned my brain over and over in some stories trying to make the word work - rereading multiple paragraphs beford just being mad.

      Clearly, I need to let this go. And I hope I didn't pass my word jinx on to you.

      AND the main point of the comment must be revived: your writing is fab-o and I thank you for it!

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      1. mydwynter on Chapter 8 Mon 08 Jul 2013 04:58PM UTC

        Holmes wreathed in smoke. By me.

        I hope it wasn't passed on, either! (But it probably was.)

        Anyway, thank you! :)

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